Leoness and the Whisper

Another picky for my story. Maybe I'll post it when it's finished...

Anyhoo, the girl in the picture is , one of the lead characters in WOB.

Practically everything in this picture is messed up. Starting with the whisper. There are supposed to be two of them. And they don't look like that either...I have no clue what was going through my head when I drew this. Both Will's body and soul are missing. I was going to draw him drapped in Leo's arms, but, try as I might, I just couldn't get it to look right. When I originaly drew the door, it was in a gagillion different colors, but then I remembered the door is ivory up until it catches fire, so I desaturated it in PS. The cloaked figure is supposed to be standing off in the distance in the reflection, and so are the Whispers.

Arg. At least the drawing itself isn't too bad